jop descriptions have to change - we need copywritersGood advertising copywriters are very expensive. A direct mail piece, written by a real professional, can cost as much as $10,000 per page. The right two words, penned by a real advertising copywriter, can cost millions. Advertising agencies know this. It’s odd, we think, that these skills and prices aren’t a part of our industry.

When a job hunter reaches a job ad online, he or she will encounter something like this:

The xxxxxxx Candy Factory, a xxxxx Company, and a leader in the children’s confectionery market, is seeking a qualified professional for its manufacturing facility.

This position coordinates and implements assigned projects from initial cost estimating through installation, start-up and debugging; recommends projects to improve plant operations, safety and reduce operating costs; works with AutoCAD, computerized purchasing and budgeting, and all departments in a manufacturing setting. Supervise, as required by project activity, contractors, in-house mechanics, draftspersons, outside vendors/consultants.

A BS in Mechanical/Electrical Engineering, 3-7 years of applicable experience in a manufacturing environment, and computer proficiency a must.

xxxxxxx offers a competitive salary, opportunity for advancement, and a benefits package that includes: medical/dental/vision/hospital life, STD/LTD, 40l(k) plan, bonus, tuition reimbursement, pension plan and more.

Yawn!

After consuming a dozen or so (out of thousands) descriptions just like this one, the typical job hunter simply starts applying blindly to any company that comes close. It’s easy to send thousands of resumes through the internet. The job hunt, driven by slothful job ads, results in a huge pile of not-necessarily related resumes.

Whose fault is it?

There is plenty of blame to go around. Any recruiter who doesn’t work to polish the job ad to a precise solicitation is a fool. Any job ad distribution service that doesn’t offer help is a waste of money. Any agency that doesn’t insist that job ads are well written and compelling is cheating its customers.

Effectiveness is always a question of the right investment at the right point. Understanding how to write the right job ad for a particular job board is the most expensive part of online recruiting.

While the world is berginning to focus on the experience of the candidate, scant attention is being paid to this root cause of the resume overflow and bad candidate experiences. Proper attention to the job ad should both reduce the flow of errant resumes and improve the candidate’s experience.

 
  • http://twitter.com/chrisrussell Chris Russell

    99% of job descriptions suck because people dont know how to write. Every company should hire an in house copywriter to write these things in my humble opinion. Recruiting is a marketing function. Its designed to get leads in the form of candidates.

    For those of you who are word challenged try using something like JobSpeek to write your descriptions.  http://jobspeek.com/jobs/

  • http://twitter.com/Alconcalcia Alasdair Murray

    Whoops! Double post

  • http://twitter.com/Alconcalcia Alasdair Murray

    That article could have been written by me. I’ve been banging on for years about the poor quality of online job content.
    70% of my work as a copywriter is with recruitment consultancies and
    advertising agencies crafting copy for the web. The clients I work with
    recognise the importance of copywriting for every bit of material they
    put out there on the internet. It’s not just a job ad, it’s a corporate
    communique that will be read by potential clients too. One last thing,
    the difference between a job ad and a job description – a job
    description is an in-house tool compiled by an employer. A checklist of
    responsibilities/duties and a person spec setting out skills and
    experience require to do the job. A job post, on the other hand, should
    be something that sells both the employer and the role to the reader. Sadly so many job ads online don’t do that. Many recruiters are missing a trick. I explain it better here http://www.alasdairdmurraycopywriter.co.uk

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  • Vinaykumar07

    Hi Chris 

    Recruiting is not a marketing function i’ts only a consultative needs analysis of both the job seeker and employer.

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